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  Downgrade

  A horror story of the Real World

  Jacqueline Patricks

  Copyright 2011 by Jacqueline Patricks

  Cover Design by Jacqueline Patricks

  First Edition: 12/2011

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  This is my experiment in writing paramedic fiction. A way for laypersons to get inside the head of a paramedic and experience what a paramedic feels during a horrific call. I worked full-time on a 911 ambulance for 22 years, most of that as a lead paramedic and field training officer. The things I saw and had to do were often terrible. Sometimes I felt the effects immediately, sometimes not until much later. Dealing with tragedy can do strange things to a person, even with training. Human beings aren’t really made to deal with such tragedy for extended periods, yet we expect our public servants to do this very thing again and again without complaint or ill effects.

  For years, I was asked, ‘What’s the grossest thing you’ve seen?’ and then the asker would cringe when I gave an honest (usually too honest) answer. You want to know? Well, here’s your chance to experience one of the grossest things a paramedic sees, smells, hears, and feels. It’s not always blood and guts.

  I ask you to keep an open mind as you read this short scene. I ask you to put yourself in the shoes of the medic. I ask yourself to not worry about plausibility because this scene is based on TRUE LIFE. I have changed certain facts to protect participants’ privacy, otherwise I lived this scene. You can’t believe it can happen? All you have to do is watch the news. Who do you think walks into those buildings where the bodies are piled?

  I have several questions after the scene. Please read and consider them. You may be surprised at how they change your perception of the scene. These questions are carefully considered to assist you in understanding the thought process of paramedics.

  “Now the sirens have a still more fatal weapon than their song, namely their silence...someone might have escaped from their singing; but from their silence, certainly never.”- Franz Kafka

  Downgrade

  The stench roils from the open front door, up and over me, several feet and fresh air unable to dissipate its stubborn formation. The sickly-sweet perfume of death, hoarding itself for days, easily outweighs the multitude of life surrounding me on this crisp spring day.

  Now I understand why the first officer on scene radioed back telling us to downgrade to no lights or sirens. I cringe; no one inside needs a paramedic to save their life. We’re for documentation purposes only, CYA against any distraught family members or opportunistic land sharks.

  Yeah, I may be a baby medic, a rookie in this fucked up shell game between life, death, EMS and everyone else, but I’m not stupid. I get why we’re here, and it’s not for the shits and giggles we get by pulling a person back from the edge. We’re here ‘cause cops like medics to lay our oh-so-professional eyes on corpses, declare them beyond help all official-like. That way cops can document they did their jobs, even though dead is dead and even a simpleton could’ve figure it out. ‘Cause once the smell oozes through Hardi-plank, you don’t need a paramedic to give them last rites.

  “But deliver us from evil,” I mutter, staring at the black rectangle most would call an open doorway into a ranch style house.

  It’s the middle of a crystal blue day, and the scent of honeysuckle weakly combats the odor hanging in air way past its saturation point. Goose bumps chase up my arms, over my shoulders, and down my back. Whatever happened in this house, whatever I’m about to see, I’m never going to un-see ‘cause I’ve got a photographic memory. It’ll haunt me until the End of Days. I’m probably the only person in the whole world praying I get Alzheimer’s.

  “You gonna go in or what?”

  I glance left to the cop. His lips are gaping open as he mouth breathes. He sounded miffed, and he’s fidgeting from left foot to right. I want to say, Really, Douchebag? Haven’t you got better things to do than piss me off? Instead I snap, “Gimme a minute.”

  I heft the cardiac monitor’s strap higher on my shoulder. Its thirty pounds of awkward medical machinery is oddly comforting. It reminds me why I’m here: attach it to the corpse inside, confirm negative heart activity, and officially declare death. But my nose and lungs are still adjusting to the God-awful reek burrowing inside my delicate tissues. It’s like standing in the middle of a compost pile, covered in human shit, coated with vomit, baking at high-noon.

  Oh, man...I’m starting to feel a bit dizzy from the overdose of decay clinging to my nostrils. I wonder if, maybe, it’s obstructing oxygen. There’s probably more methane in the air than I should be breathing. Fuck, you’d think my nose would numb itself after a few minutes, but not to this odor. Uh-uh, too powerful, too overwhelming, it re-doses with each inhalation, mega strength.

  Turning to my senior partner, I say, “Since I’m up, if you don’t want to...”

  “Thanks, but you’re not going in there alone,” he says with a grim smile.

  It reassures me. It’s always good to have back up. “Okay.” I nod. It’s time to enter the stinky house of death.

  The cop says as we pass him, “She’s in the master bathroom. You can’t miss her.”

  Great, awesome, fucking thanks, don’t guide us in or anything.

  I don’t bother answering Douchebag as the entryway’s gloom wraps around me, sucks me in with its thickening odor and darkness. I feel like I’m attempting a significantly less enjoyable version of scuba diving, forcibly pulling air through the demand valve while several atmospheres of water pressure contract my torso. My lungs constrict and spasm, trying to reject the travesty of air.

  “Shit, he could’ve at least left the fucking light on,” my partner says behind me. I hear his hand fumbling along the wall-click-click-but no light. “Shit.”

  “Lights must be out,” I say.

  “You think?”

  “Whatever, let’s just find the fucking bathroom.” My voice is stuffy since now I’m mouth breathing too. But the smell is so pungent it sticks to my tongue and unfamiliar tastes assault my buds—flavors only a dung beetle could love. I gag, choking my BK broiler up from my gut.

  “Slow breaths, kid.”

  His palm feels warm against my upper back through my golf-style shirt. The weight of the cardiac monitor slides away as he takes it, and I realize I’m doubled over, hands on my knees. My stomach cramps and twists, heaving my lunch up from the very pits of my body. Crap. That could’ve gone better. Straightening, I wipe my mouth with the back of my hand and notice through the gloom that my partner, while pale, hasn’t sickened.

  Fucking veterans.

  “Maybe you should wait outside...?” he asks, shrugging towards the door.

  “I got this.” I put strength behind my words and clench my fists. “Come on.”

  “Alright, then.” He smiles, not much, but enough that my confidence is bolstered. I’ve made the right decision. This time.

  Forcing myself, I walk the rest of the long ent
ryway, check the routes and decide left is the master bedroom direction. I’m correct ‘cause a few doors down the scent coagulates further. Along the way, we try more light switches, nothing. Power is out to the whole house, but the block is normal.

  “Owners didn’t pay their bills?” I whisper back to my partner stealthing behind me. I feel like I’m violating something sacrosanct by speaking. The stillness pervades more than the air, the carpet absorbs our boot steps, and the dull paint deepens the murk. Even my usually snide partner sounds moderately respectful with his short reply.

  “Maybe...”

  End of the hall.

  Latex encased palm flat to the door, I push it open, and more gloom reveals a typical suburban bedroom. Not the tidiest, nor the messiest, it’s comfortably lived it. Clothes are tossed in a pile on a chair and a there’s partially unmade bed as if someone woke and forgot to dress it. But it’s not the look of the chronically messy. That’s interesting, though I’m not sure why. It niggles my gut, like a half-formed plot.

  “When we got here, didn’t the cop say he thought she’d killed herself?” I ask.

  “Um…yeah, why?”

  I shrug, uncertain. “Don’t know, maybe nothing.”

  “Bathroom. On the right.” He points over my shoulder, nudges past me, and I stumble a bit.

  He’s as eager to get this over as I am, but something feels wrong and I really don’t want to see what’s in the bathroom. Today is one of those days I should’ve called in a mental health day, skipped and played ostrich. Then it hits me, the buzzing. Flies, dozens of them, are zipping around. I can’t see them, but I can hear them. I gulp. How long has she been here?

  Moving quickly, my partner strides around the bed and stands at the bathroom’s threshold, door open ninety degrees to me. The contrast of sunlight beating through the door halos my partner, ribbons around him like Heaven’s light. It makes my eyes water.

  “Oh fuck,” he mutters, reflexively bracing himself on the jamb, knees buckling.

  “What?” I rush over. My brain is screaming to stop—reverse, don’t approach!—but my legs are moving involuntarily. I can’t help it. My partner needs me, plus there’s something sick and twisted veiled inside all paramedics that needs to see, to know, to catalog the atrocities of our fucked up human world.

  “Don’t—” He partially rotates, hands up. God bless him, he’s trying to protect me, but it doesn’t matter. Sooner or later I’ll see something similar or worse.

  But it’s too late. I’m there, behind him. “Oh God.” I blink, stunned.

  She’s beautiful, or was, illuminated in sunlight flowing through an over-sized, frosted window. Lying in the filled bathtub, she’s nude, laid open as if receiving a lover. Her dark brown hair is plastered to her perfect bone structure and her eyes are closed as if she’d drifted off while enjoying a spa day. She’s clenching a French chef knife. It’s lying flat to her stomach, the point between her breasts. Oddly enough, the rational part of my brain recognizes the stupid knife brand ‘cause I own the same expensive set (house warming gift).

  Chopping meat will never be the same.

  She’d plunged the knife (it’s guaranteed a lifetime edge–no sharpening!) repeatedly into her abdomen. And I count at least a dozen deep wounds. I know they’re deep ‘cause the dark lines over her belly are approximately the same width as the blade ending at the handle. I’m certain it did the job efficiently. It’s a really great knife.

  Oh God, what the fuck is wrong with me?

  Then I notice the water. It’s dark maroonish brown tinged with streaks of yellow and separating into bands—old blood, decomposing. Had she bled out slow? Probably, ‘cause then I see the worst horror. On the tile wall, written in blood by finger, are her last words.

  ‘I ‘heart’ God.’

  Only she’d scrawled a bloody ‘heart’ symbol rather than the word.

  “Oh shit...fuck...” Stumbling back, I slam my eyes shut. It’s only been maybe ten seconds since I peered around my partner. But hell, it’s enough.

  “Out kid, we’re done!”

  “But…the monitor?” Opening my eyes, I reach for it, but he grabs my wrist, and his fingers dig deep, pinching my tendons. It should hurt, but I’m numb. All I can see is her.

  “I don’t need a fucking monitor to tell me she’s dead.” His eyes glint at me. “Do you?”

  I think for a second. He’s asking me to lie on our medical report, to back him up. It also means we won’t have to touch her. It’s one less fucked up memory to file in my perfect brain.

  “No,” I look him straight in the eyes, “I don’t.”

  “Let’s get out of here.”

  I nod and follow him out, both of us hurrying as if Hell’s Hounds gnawed at our heels until we plunge headlong into fresh air and salvation, gulping both.

  “So,” Douchebag cop says, “she officially dead?”

  My partner smirks. “Oh yeah, as a door nail.”

  I watch their exchange, absorbing how my partner deals out inter-agency sarcasm like a pimp handling smarmy johns.

  Douchebag continues, “If it was up to me, I would’ve disregarded y’all.” He shrugs. “I mean, with the smell and all...”

  “Oh, I know, man.”

  “But regs,” Douchebag says, “you know how it is.”

  What bullshit, there aren’t any rules saying we have to make an obvious death scene. Even my rookie ass knows this, hence his douchebaggery. My hand itches to slap the lying sack of shit into next Tuesday. I feel my partner’s hand grip my bicep and steer me toward our ambulance idling at the curb.

  “We get it,” my partner says as we pass, then adds casually. “Hey, I really hope we’re on duty when you get shot.”

  “What?” Douche-bag says.

  “Wanna return the favor. Have a nice day!” he tells speechless, gaping-fish cop and waggles his fingers in a jaunty wave.

  We jump into our ambulance, and I ask my partner, “You were just fucking with him right?”

  He gives me a blank look.

  “I mean, if he really got shot, you’d help him. Right?”

  Then he laughs, a bit manically in my opinion. “Sure, kid, I’d help him.” He puts the truck in gear, pulls away, then glances back over to me with a weird look in his eyes. I’ve known my partner for months, met his wife and his two kids, but I’ve never seen this version—glassy eyes with a weird tic to his upper lid. My gut niggles at me again. Dully, my partner says, “I mean...that’s what we do. We help people.”

  His tone crystallizes my heart, and the shards cut me open from the inside. For the first time since starting this career a year ago, I wonder if being a paramedic really is just about helping people. I wonder how many layers of crap I’ll have to swim through just keep my head above the surface. I wonder how I’ll keep the pieces of my sanity together long enough to survive to retirement, or if I’ll survive.

  Fuck.

  What gender was the rookie paramedic?

  Why did you pick male/female?

  Did you notice that there are no identifying pronouns or a name for the rookie? This was deliberate. Now how do you feel about the rookie’s gender?

  Do you feel the story was unresolved?

  Did that lack of resolution bother you?

  Paramedics must learn to deal with this lack of resolution, or suffer a great deal of frustration and anger.

  Did you respond to any of the dark humor?

  If so, did you cringe when you did? Why?

  Gallows humor is a necessary part of a paramedic’s career/life in order to stay sane.

  How did the visceral cues make you feel?

  How did the interaction with the police officer make you feel?

  How did the veteran paramedic’s reaction at the end make you feel?

  Did you feel horror at the veteran’s lack of empathy?

  If so, why?

  Disassociation is a common problem that veteran paramedics (burnt/burnouts) must learn to overcome and manage. Deali
ng with horrific scenes and the callous public can destroy paramedics if they’re not aware of this.

  I hope this has helped you understand the mind and issues of paramedics, even a little. Be careful out there and have a wonderful day!

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  Read my second paramedic fiction Dog Days of Dying – it’s a longer, more positive, uplifting story. (I know, Downgrade was harsh. I did warn you! Plus, Dog Days it more of a real story, but paramedics see bad things, so I like to start with this one and see if you can hang. If so, then you’ll probably love my second one.)

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